One of my critique partners sent me a fresh batch of revision suggestions. The scene where Humphrey escapes to Tom Sawyer’s Island has been spruced up and reads much better. Also, a couple of glitches have been worked out in the plotline. Whew!
I’ve been reading “Always Neverland” by Zoe Barton and it’s full of imagination and life. I want my book to be full of life, too. If I keep reading, keep writing and keep dreaming – maybe I’ll get there.